Living in The Big City
Living in the big city has many advantages and disadvantages. Disadvantages of living in big city are about traffic, crime, pollution, etc. First I want to explain about the traffic. Big city is a famous about traffic. Traffic in big city usually because every family has a car more than two. Second is about criminals. Many people in big cities that need the work and cost money to feed his family will d various things to find such intention to kill, steal, and others. The third is about pollution. A lot of pollution in big cities due to the lack of trees and many people has a personal vehicle and no one wants to walk or use bicycles without causing pollution. In conclusion that live in big cities is has many disadvantages like pollution, criminal and traffic.
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